I can't tell what is going on past the vegetation. I see clouds and they
seem to be reflecting but the reflective surface doesn't look very much like
water. I couldn't tell what those ships were until someone said they were
ships. However, you said you were remodelling them so ignore that. i'm also
not sure where my attention should be focused. Everything past the
vegetation is a little confusing, or too turbulent and the lighting in the
forground doesn't draw my eye anywere, rather everywhere and jumping around.
(sorry if i'm a bit harsh, i didn't want to just leave it at "wow" so i dug
into it a little more)

all in all it's really good. like all the rest of your work, and shows a lot
of promise. I can't wait until it's finished.

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